Hello writer....
I never gave opinion on your writing before...
I am a huge fan of not only your writing but also The YOU as a person
You write your story beautifully...,
The clarity/pov of each character is so on point that, as a reader I own/understand your characters like it's my second personality throughout EBL ..
But in EBI, I feel like I don't know the Main Leads that well, may be it is because the story is still young ...
But I cannot help thinking reason behind is
1. The each chapter length of EBI is less in comparison to that of EBL
2. The Multi Pov's in EBI, in EBL we were so content with Adi and Vishu, Nanda and Shruthi (infact I was diying for to know a little more of their pov) but in EBI, there are many like Kheera, Yashu, Deva, Vishnu Sir, Vinod and Shanti....
And the fact that Vinod and Shanti are getting more story lines than Dheera and Yashu....I don't mind though but not at the cost of Dheera and Yashu's Pov's .... specially Dheera's pov ....he has very little lines ...
Please please please give us more about Kheera and Yashu... pretty please
I'm sorry if I hurt You ....
Thank you
Regards
Your Royal Reader