Teen Fiction

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Judge of Teen Fiction: _CognoScenti_


Book name: Life within the hall

Writer name:  reindolfwrites

Writer name:  reindolfwrites

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•Marks: 96

COVER : 9
TITLE : 9
BLURBS : 9
1ST IMPACT : 9
TWIST/PLOT : 10
STORY LINE : 10
CHARACTER : 10
GRAMMAR : 10
ENJOYMENT : 10
LAST IMPACT: 10

Remark: The title of the book is captivating, and the author's narrative skills are remarkable.
The language is attractive, and readers can vividly visualize the scenarios. The prologue
effectively piques readers' curiosity, making them eager to discover more. The story's pacing is
great, and the revelation of mysteries is expertly carried out. The inclusion of a sense of horror
makes it even more interesting. The development of cute couples and amusing banter between
friends is delightful. I'm surprised, Despite many characters, I was able to easily identify them
and distinguish between their personalities.

2nd place
B

ook name : Dude, I kissed your mom
Writer name:  quyvozi

Marks: 95 COVER : 9 TITLE : 10 BLURBS : 10 1ST IMPACT : 9 TWIST/PLOT : 9 STORY LINE : 9 CHARACTER : 10 GRAMMAR : 10 ENJOYMENT : 10 LAST IMPACT: 9 Remark : The prologue was captivating, author knows exactly which part of the Story and how it should...

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Marks: 95
COVER : 9
TITLE : 10
BLURBS : 10
1ST IMPACT : 9
TWIST/PLOT : 9
STORY LINE : 9
CHARACTER : 10
GRAMMAR : 10
ENJOYMENT : 10
LAST IMPACT: 9
Remark : The prologue was captivating, author knows exactly which part of the Story and how
it should be included in the prologue. The vocabulary was impressive, and the narration was not
just engaging but also enjoyable. It was fun a read! It's my first time reading in some bad guys
friend group pov. The book was wild. Lol. I absolutely love those clever and sassy remarks in
the book. The storytelling tone is super engaging, with a fun touch of sarcasm.

3rd place

Book name : Racing towards your heart
Writer name:  ZenCave

Marks: 94 COVER : 9 TITLE : 9 BLURBS : 10 1ST IMPACT : 9 TWIST/PLOT : 10 STORY LINE : 9 CHARACTER : 10 GRAMMAR : 9 ENJOYMENT : 10 LAST IMPACT: 9 Remark: The title and book cover were appealing

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Marks: 94
COVER : 9
TITLE : 9
BLURBS : 10
1ST IMPACT : 9
TWIST/PLOT : 10
STORY LINE : 9
CHARACTER : 10
GRAMMAR : 9
ENJOYMENT : 10
LAST IMPACT: 9
Remark: The title and book cover were appealing. The writing style is engaging, capturing your
attention and keeping you immersed in the story. Descriptions are well-crafted, allowing you to
understand emotions and vividly imagine scenes. The pace of the story was just right. Chapter
titles were creative. The novel's strength lies in its characterization. I particularly enjoyed the
interactions within the friend group. The storyline is intriguing and held my interest throughout
the book

Runner ups
1st

Book name: In my head
Writer name:  ACSutliff

Marks: 93
COVER : 9
TITLE : 10
BLURBS : 9
1ST IMPACT : 9
TWIST/PLOT : 9
STORY LINE : 9
CHARACTER : 10
GRAMMAR : 10
ENJOYMENT : 9
LAST IMPACT: 9

Remark: Prologue was attractive. Narration was captivating and I could clearly understand the
emotions which is being conveyed. I love the bond Hasting brother's have, it's admirable.
Storyline was interesting. The cast ,place , scenario everything felt authentic. Descriptions were
perfect enough to clearly visualize scenarios in my head. Pace was perfect. It was a good read.

2nd
Story name: Iridescence
Writer name:  CemeteryFaerie

Marks: 92
COVER : 8
TITLE : 10
BLURBS : 9
1ST IMPACT : 9
TWIST/PLOT : 9
STORY LINE : 9
CHARACTER : 10
GRAMMAR : 10
ENJOYMENT : 9
LAST IMPACT: 9

Remark: Character introductions were useful, as remembering them became easier through
these intros and descriptions. The storyline was interesting and kept me hooked. The title was
unique and caught my attention. The narration was captivating and held my interest. Characters
were fascinating and played their roles well, contributing to the story, and their personalities
added depth. I enjoyed how the couples were developing – it's cute. The dialogues were
well-done and engaging. The pacing was consistent. It was my first time exploring Greek
mythology stories, and I really enjoyed it! It was a fun reading.

3rd
Book name : Misery
Writers name : @theyoungwriter0415
(If anyone can contact this user please let them know, I can't find their account.)

Marks : 87
COVER : 10
TITLE : 9
BLURBS : 8
1ST IMPACT : 9
TWIST/PLOT : 8
STORY LINE : 9
CHARACTER : 8
GRAMMAR : 9
ENJOYMENT : 9
LAST IMPACT: 8

Remark: The story was captivating, and I didn't feel bored while reading. The descriptions were
simple yet effective in conveying the author's emotions. The presentation is clear, using
descriptive details to create vivid scenes. To enhance the reader's connection with Layla's
character, consider delving deeper into her internal thoughts and emotions during key moments.
I'm curious about Layla's journey in this society, and I look forward to seeing how she grows and
learns to love herself. The book cover and The title aligns with the narrative, providing a glimpse
into the central theme of the protagonist's struggles and changes.


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