Mystry/ Thriller

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Judge of Mystry/Thriller: prekshanagupta

1st place : Fading spotlight by  reindolfwrites

1. Cover:  8.5 /10
2. Title: 9 /10
3. Blurb: 7.5/10
4. First impact: 9/10
5. Twist/plot: 9.5/10
5. Storyline: 9.5  /10
6. Character: 9/10
8. Grammar: 8/10
9. Enjoyment: 6.5/10
10. Last impact:8  /10
11. Overall: 84.5/100

Review: The beginning of the story was intriguing and the way , prologue was written piqued my interest much more

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Review: The beginning of the story was intriguing and the way , prologue was written piqued my interest much more. Isabella's character was beautifully portrayed all over the book and the character of Edward as well. "The man in the mask" had mentioned hooked till the end. The ending was somewhat comforting.

2nd place : Whitby Dossier by  BellOfSilence

1. Cover:  9/10
2. Title: 9.5/10
3. Blurb: 8/10
4. First impact: 7/10
5. Twist/plot: 6.5/10
5. Storyline: 7.5 /10
6. Character: 6.5/10
8. Grammar: 9.5/10
9. Enjoyment: 7/ 10
10. Last impact: 8 /10
11. Overall: 78.5/100

Review:  The whole from the beginning was a bit disturbing with the description of the details that were required by the plot

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Review:  The whole from the beginning was a bit disturbing with the description of the details that were required by the plot. Yet, the whole construction of sentences and the character development was marvelled to perfection.

3rd place: Dungeon by
Ablazeisaleo

1.Cover: 6/10
2. Title: 5.5/10
3. Blurb: 8/10
4. First impact: 7.5/10
5. Twist/plot:  8/10
6. Storyline: 7.5/10
7. Character: 8/10
8. Grammar: 10/10
9. Enjoyment: 8.5/10
10. Last impact:  8.5 /10
11. Overall: 77.5 /100

5 /100

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Review:  The starting of the story was quite eventful and dramatic, I had to ponder on the fact that the event was really happening or not , damn! The action and impeccable description of every detail in the story is totally commendable. Well done!

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Congratulations to the runner ups!!

1st : Cataract of delusion by  new_erasktaylor

1. Cover: 8.5/10
2. Title: 7/10
3. First impact: 9/10
4. Twist/plot: 7.5/10
5. Storyline: 9.5/10
6. Character: 7.5/10
7. Blurb: 5/10
8. Grammar: 4/10
9. Enjoyment: 6/10
10. Last impact: 5/10
11. Overall:  69/100

Review:  The prologue was indeed interesting to read. I loved how Olivia's character bloomed in every way possible, it was magical from the childhood leading her to absolute darkness when she commited the crime forcefully, because her husband was the real threat.
Critically analysing , grammatical errors are needed to be acknowledged that is to be corrected in many areas of the book.

2nd : Stuck with you by  Itshikha

1. Cover:  4.5/10
2. Title: 8/10
3. Blurb: 6/10
4. First impact: 6.5/10
5. Twist/plot: 7/10
5. Storyline: 6.5 /10
6. Character: 7/10
8. Grammar: 8/10
9. Enjoyment: 7.5/10
10. Last impact: 7  /10
11. Overall: 68/100

Review: The story was narrated well. Main character developments of Adhvik and Vaani stole the show! A bit grammatical changes are needed. A nice read.

3rd : Total eclipse of the heart Min Yoongi by  strawberry1d

1. Cover: 6/10
2. Title: 7.5/10
3. Blurb: 6.5/10
4. First impact: 8/10
5. Twist / plot: 6.5/10
6. Storyline: 7/10
7. Character: 8.5/10
8. Grammar: 5/10
9. Enjoyment: 6/10
10. Last impact: 8/10
11. Overall: 62.5/100

Review: The story from the first was captivating , I am not a fan of fan- fictions but the imaginative storytelling had me hooked. A good read.

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